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Maegan Heil's avatar

I like this one a lot.

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Maegan Heil's avatar

A lot a lot.

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Matt Bartle's avatar

Ah man, thank you so much! And thanks for stopping by and checking stuff out. I really appreciate it.

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Kris Mole's avatar

'kin hell, mate.

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Matt Bartle's avatar

Haha, I'm going to take that as a compliment.

I originally wanted the reader to question whether the narrator had killed his wife, but I don't have the skills to write such an unreliable narrator, so it ended up a little more linear.

The whole thing was based on when my wife was ill and, at one point, I questioned whether I'd see her again. I did, and she's fine. Just my brain catasteophising as usual.

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Kris Mole's avatar

Ha, glad to hear it! I actually read it like she'd done herself in. Probably says more about the type of girl I have experience with :/

It's good shit whatever way you read it.

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