Like it. It's the sort of writing that anyone can connect with; as if you're tapping into a shared memory. Later on, after reading, you're like "Where were we going that time she was giving me shit for having my feet on the dashboard?" You gotta remind yourself no no it wasn't me, it was Matt's character that happened to. But it feels like a real memory.
Bartle! Where have you been?! Get back to posting!!! Checking in on you.
Happy New Year, mate. Hope you're well. Any danger of a new story any time soon??
Like it. It's the sort of writing that anyone can connect with; as if you're tapping into a shared memory. Later on, after reading, you're like "Where were we going that time she was giving me shit for having my feet on the dashboard?" You gotta remind yourself no no it wasn't me, it was Matt's character that happened to. But it feels like a real memory.